Hw 21b - Expert #1 - T/V comments.

To Jessica C. :


You should add some of your own insight, include your perspective. Explain a connection you may have to her situation, and if you don't have one than you can use a friends loss as an example. Just try to give a connection.




To Lora :


I think you did very good with your list of Ms Woods important insights, but just try to proofread your blog before you post it. "In-brace" should be embrace, on your list "Ounce" should be once, etc, and "granited" should be granted.